SCRIPT CORRECTIONS

$120 for Scripts Under 120 Pages

Absolutely everything that is wrong on the page, from format to spelling, will be commented on in red ink. Alternative, more reader-friendly ways to express your ideas will be provided.

This service is mainly intended for the beginning writer, or for the writer that has written a few screenplays but still faces Clarity/Readability challenges.

This is not story coverage, but I do not rest until I point out everything that I believe is wrong with the script. You will get plenty on-the-margin notes in red ink, on format, structure, theme, pacing and a lot more.  

Included in your “Script Correction” will be comments and suggestions on the:

• Proper Formatting of Scene Headings/Slug Lines 
• Consistency of Naming Characters and Locations
• Use of too many words in Dialogue and Action
• Use of On-The-Nose Dialogue
• Improper use of Parentheticals instead of Action
• Increase of the white space on the page
• Avoiding of Camera Direction

When To Make Payment

Payment should received before the script will be read.

Before you hit the “Buy now” button to pay, we need to communicate either by phone or email, to verify that you are in agreement with my services, fees, and turnaround time.  

Repeat Services - Minor Corrections